OrAl PrEsEnTaTiOn

OBSERVATION OF MY ORAL PRESENTATION

CHILDHOOD OBESITY, Sergi Garcia.

In my presentation I used powerpoint . I think that the powerpoint I used was relevant to the topic and attractive. My presentation was 5 min. 30 sec. long.
I tried to look at the audience most of the time but possibly not enough and I was reading occasionally from my notes. I used hand gestures to hold the attention of de audience.
I organized my ideas in order important, but I could have used discourse markers to make my ideas more clear.
My information was detailed and clear but I didn’t used enough examples. I look the information mostly on the internet and also in books about health.
My grammar was correct and my vocabulary quite rich and varied, but I can improve. I didn’t used enough sentence linkers or pause fillers and I need to remember this for my next oral presentation.
I think I spoke too quickly and this was bad for the presentation. I need to speak more slowly and pronounce my words more clearly.
I think the subject of my oral presentation was interesting and relevant and I think my mark should be six or seven. I need to improve my used of sentence linkers and pause filers. Also I need to learn more vocabulary and speak more slowly and more clearly.